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All Deviations
All Deviations


Why is it
that you torture me
Why is it
that you play with my heart
Why is it
that you cheat on me
Why is it
that you long for her heart

Why is it
that i'm not perfect
Why is it
that i'm no longer your friend
Why is it
that i hate myself
Why is it
that i cry all day

Why
Why
Beacause you did it
Because you're mean
Becuase i didnt let you close enough to me

Only because you're a sleeze
You'll never be forgiven
I've finished the chapter and closed the book
Pushing all thoughts of you away into the dark spaces of my head
...now i cant even remember your name.
©2005-2008 ~shadowed-princess
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Submitted: November 18, 2005
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hmm, this poem is [work in progress] need to fix a few lines and stanzas, edit the whole thing, but this is how i;m feeling now, sorta...... hope the poem is alrite
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~mysticsilverstar:iconmysticsilverstar: Nov 18, 2005, 11:31:35 PM
wow...i can feel the emotion in this...especially in the last few lines...i love those....but yea, it can be polished a bit here and there. cuz some bits dun feel like they flow properly. but other than that, i think it's great! :hug: luv ya hun :heart:

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